Thank you so much, here I scale up the IronFire #147.
sure that will be pleasure.. I hope so, and glad if able to get another work of course :)
Thank you
I think 'Ironfire' can be scaled up just a little to fill the empty space below the mountains graphic. I am 90% certain that this will be the winning entry. Great job! I really appreciate how quickly you have been able to turn around my changes. I will have more work for you so I hope we can extend our relationship beyond this contest.
Ok. . so I think we are very close, but I still would like to see a couple of edits. 1. The main text (Ironfire, Brands, and Leather Patch...) needs to be more centered vertically (ie. it needs to come down to be more centered vertically). It just looks a little 'top heavy' right now. 2. Please remove or significantly reduce the texture marks on the background. Thanks. This is looking really good for you in the contest!
For some reason the scaling of this layout is bothering me. Can you make the ironfire brands bigger and more centered vertically? I like the cow skull but maybe that can be underneath and let the text lay over it.
Very nice! Can we try it with a little less upward angle on the peak? I would like to see it a little wider and slightly flatter. Also, try about half as much of the 'texturing' so it does not interfere as much with the text. Finally, 'BRANDS' could be just a little bigger. Thanks!
This is almost perfect! Could I see a variation with a six-pointed rectangle? Basically a rectangle with a peak and a truck, point at the bottom and the top
the font detail is still not what I am trying to describe. the detail I am looking for is similar to the serif, except I want small triangular points protruding from the stems of the letters. In my markup above, I am indicating where they would be on the 'I'. . they should be added to all vertical straight stems. . thanks.
One minor change that I would suggest for scaling. If you move the skull just slightly lower and make 'BRANDS' bigger I think that would look great. If you need to make the flames smaller that's fine
It occured to me that the flames above the mountains can look like a forest fire. Let's lose the flames and push the mountain higher. This will allow you to use complete lettering for 'IronFire'. If you are able to incorporate flame details somewhere else, I am open to that. Thanks.
This looks great! The only thing I would change is to put Dallas Texas in block letters similar to the ironfire font. No weather changes for now. Thanks for all your work!
A couple of ideas I have are to make the 'IRONFIRE' letters bigger and change the font on 'Brands' to block letters. Also try the stitch line in white for more contrast. Thanks.
can we try it with the thick border line again. It would look great with the stitching line overlaid in a contrasting color like light brown. Finally, maybe make the background a little darker brown. . You are quickly moving up my list of favorites!
Hello,
Thank you so much for your feedback..
here the update from previous entries.. #29 or #30
if you need other adjustment, please feel free and don't hesitate for ask me..
I'll pleasure for any changes that you need :)
Thank you
Best Regards
Amanterkendali
Nice work! I like this concept a lot! The only changes I would suggest would be to shorten the horns so they do not extend outside the inner circle boundary, and to modify the outside boundary to look like a stitch line with really thick thread (i.e. saddle stitching). You definitely jumped into my 'favorites' category with this!
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sure that will be pleasure.. I hope so, and glad if able to get another work of course :)
Thank you
Best Regards
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Thank you so much for your continue feedback..
how about this? #152
I decrease the skull little bit and centering the main text..
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I'm not sure with what you mean..
is that you mean something like #140 or #141?
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like #65 or #66
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without spacing IronFire, a little smaller skull.
change the dallas texas font more classic
How do you think?
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how do you think?
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Thank you for your continue feedback..
is that you mean something like #33?
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Thank you so much for your feedback..
here the update from previous entries.. #29 or #30
if you need other adjustment, please feel free and don't hesitate for ask me..
I'll pleasure for any changes that you need :)
Thank you
Best Regards
Amanterkendali
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