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Like the square shape.
Like the three-tier size of letters.
Love the telescope treatment.
Possible to see a second version?
Rather than a broad, green border, perhaps think of a sandbox-style light brown box around the lettering. Then a thinner green border on the outside.
Perhaps on the inside of the box, the fill color could be sand versus green?
If that works, probably need to change the letter colors.
Perhaps the IoT could then be the green, the SANDBOX could be orange (see the other finalists with a second orange color), and THE FUTURE OF DATA could be green. So green, orange, green letters.
For sure, make the white "O" in IoT half the width of the "I" and "T" so that the "O" letter is smaller while the telescope image retains the current size and prominence.
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Like the square shape.
Like the three-tier size of letters.
Love the telescope treatment.
Possible to see a second version?
Rather than a broad, green border, perhaps think of a sandbox-style light brown box around the lettering. Then a thinner green border on the outside.
Perhaps on the inside of the box, the fill color could be sand versus green?
If that works, probably need to change the letter colors.
Perhaps the IoT could then be the green, the SANDBOX could be orange (see the other finalists with a second orange color), and THE FUTURE OF DATA could be green. So green, orange, green letters.
For sure, make the white "O" in IoT half the width of the "I" and "T" so that the "O" letter is smaller while the telescope image retains the current size and prominence.
Great work.