We are making our final decision and both #9 and #28 of yours are still in the running. Can you make the type slightly smaller on #9? On #28 it looks like a circle shadow is showing through on some of the small balls. Can you reduce the gradiation on that one? We have to make our decision tomorrow.
Thanks for your feedback, I've make revision as you requested but because Logo Tournament rule, I can't submit my revision Unless you make one of my entry to be no 1