out of all the versions with Graduation Caps, this seems to be the best. Color works too. Not sold on idea though. I would like to see something that's a little more edgy, a little more web 2.0. A logo more focused on the type treatment than the graphic mark. Maybe something more abstract. Let me know if that helps.
The cap represents a "completion" of your studies. My Student Application is a doorway to begin that process. Its meant to make the process of applying to schools easier & less painful. I think we want to try to get this across.
- Versions #15-18...Could we try the word "my" in a scripted font to make it more personal. Checkout Mac's "Mobile Me" logo. Notice how "me" is scripted. Also try a darker color. I think the yellow will be hard to read on white. - I like the computer symbols alot. The pointer, the checkbox. They make sense. - I don't like the pencils. It infers handwriting which is the opposite of what we're trying to do. - No more Graduation Caps please - I like the document symbol. Instead of 2 doc images, can we have 1 larger odc? Was there a reason for 2?
Thanks a lot for the feedback, it really makes the process much better. The reason for the 2nd document was to give the impression of several applications in one unique place, your site.
And i'll get to work on the rest of the suggestions, thanks again for the feedback
#27 - can we lose the mouse -make the clip board larger -can we try a different color or highlight on the word "my"
#24 -I like your idea of several applications. Instead of 2 docs side by side, how about 2 or maybe 3 docs stacked on top of one another (like paper). Then the finger point centered on top. Make sense?
OK, i did those corrections, and added some 3d effect to the design, please let me know any other thoughts you have. Its really nice to work with someone who gives feedback, thanks a lot!