I have looked at the revisions you made. The issue is to not have the middle line the longest. You have the small yellow line and if you could make the next one the longest, the third line the shortest and the last line at the bottom the second longest. Just so the middle one of the 3 longer lines is not the longest.
This is the frontrunner right now. I did have a request by one reviewer to change the length of the green line - it is too far in front of the others. You can make the blue or red longer and the green shorter,. bottom line we just do not want the middle one (green) quite so long so please adjust accordingly. Also, if you could make the name below the IOMSC slightly larger. If you will do the revisions both with and without the globe.
It is difficult to read the full name which I know is very long but this needs to be larger. also could I see a version with the lines going around a globe? the globe could be more a shadow rather than very dark.
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