currently it looks like a spiral can we please make it look like a wave? it always goes away from us and not wraps around. the right most line as it burns feels different than the top 4, the lines also need to get thinner as they go away from us.
i think the breaks are less visible but you do have a clear change of color as the turns happen which we need to make sure that its more of a gradient.
we have lost the flow and the roundness of the lines. i dont like the new version. i want the feeling that the lines are constantly moving away from us in perspective but keeping the original silhouette.
i've made some changes to give feel more uniform and the line flow continuously, maybe it looks a little diffrence from the original, but if u would love to see and give more direction, i will update it.
This still needs quite a bit of cleanup sir. The lines need to feel more uniform in size, eight now one is thicker and the other one is thinner and before the turns it’s still breaking. Will you be able to take this to the finish line?
Ok I think we are getting close, unfortunately, the lines don’t feel continuous. I don’t get the sense that the same line is going and turning and then turning back. There seems to be a break every time the line changes direction. Also we need a bit of an white border around the DJ so that we see it more clearly.
Can we please match the proportions of the logo to what i sent? Also in the image i sent it the lines on the let side were not sharp. it was a soft gradient.
Can we extend the top of the J.
i would also love to see if we can play with the lines a bit more. Maybe try doing something with the 5 lines and mixing it with soundwaves where the lines are a bit more jagged to represent soundwaves.
lets try a version of this where the top line is blue and the bottom line is gray and the gradient is going from top to bottom instead of left and right.
so i like where this is going just want to work on the lines a bit. please have a look at this concept that i photoshopped. Can you look at rank 2 but I just don’t like the shape of the lines https://www.dropbox.com/s/gmr50bdyo54yc8w/dji_concept.jpg?dl=0
We dont have to copy the lines exactly from my mock-up but it can be a more abstract and cleaner version of that shape
I saw the ew designs and the waves got really long and weird. I want a left and right to go to a sharper tip instead of being cut off the way it is now. Its really difficult to explain. I wish I could draw and send you what I'm saying.
There’s still something that I’m not happy with. The waves don’t feel smooth and still feel like they break in the middle. The tops of the waves should be sharper so we don’t see the cut on the left and right.
can we make the waves a bit more smooth so it doesnt feel like it changes direction when it goes from gray to blue. Lets try a version where the circle in the middle is empty inside. The left and right of the waves should taper to sharper tips.
Can we somehow incorporate the dj in the middle with the lines? The lines should be continuous and not break in the middle, like if they twisted. Also can you please use a similar font as the 3
would like to change the lines to be horizontal instead of vertical so it looks like the 5 lines in a note sheet. I wouLS like a note that is sitting on the 4th line from the bottom which represents D that looks like a combination of the English letters d and J
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i still workin hard to give your request as you need. be patient for a few hours and i'll come up with something fresh.
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i will change the line pespective base on the original design
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https://www.dropbox.com/s/d2uq3i2hlrcs8xb/inen_logo_notes.jpg?dl=0
Lets match this as close as possible so that we can work on the colors.
Please let me know if you have any questions so that i can address them before you revise.
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Can we extend the top of the J.
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And a second version with the circle in the DJ solid.
Let’s get the shape down and we can play with some color ideas.
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https://cdn5.vectorstock.com/i/1000x1000/99/09/equalizer-vizualisation-sound-wave-energy-vector-21809909.jpg
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imaging if the lines on the left extended out and came down towards the word international.
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https://www.dropbox.com/s/gmr50bdyo54yc8w/dji_concept.jpg?dl=0
We dont have to copy the lines exactly from my mock-up but it can be a more abstract and cleaner version of that shape
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check #77 i hope it works better
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i hope it works better
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