Entry 18 looks nice and clean but maybe the small letters seems less formal than our customers would expect, we like the feeling of community in #17.
I am having a problem getting comfortable with what have so far. You seem very creative. Do you have other out of the box ideas to help us achieve our goals.
We need to appeal to the students (6th through 12th grades, mainly in China) and their families and private schools in the USA. All aspects can be changed including changing the byline, eliminating the shield, etc.
#61 - with this design I have introduced a blue (blue mainly because of the word blueprint) to make the design more colourful and fresh, which should make it more appealing to students. Also a pale gold star has been added to the 'O' of IEO to emphasis the word or idea of opportunities. The name has been broken up into two colours which helps the overall look of the design.