Thanks for the feedback. please note that I have created the latice work in this logo as a repeat pattern that would mean that if you wanted to use this pattern in other areas of your brand you could tile it as big a s a rugby field if you wanted, wallpaper, the side of your vehicle, you name it.
Thanks again for your submission. #20 I appreciate your way of thinking regarding carrying the branding through the company, thank you. I see this pattern however as a weave rather than a latticework. I'm wondering if there is too much colour. Too much going on. Would like a more elegant design. Want my name 'by Kristine McIlveen' in design. Please continue to submit designs.
This damask type pattern has been created by mirroring the I and C of the font, again the pattern is fully tillable and scalable. You could perhaps use the simplified logo and then the pattern in conjunction with it on other design elements, you could imagine the logo in its simplist form placed nice and cleanly on a client presentation folder with the pattern ghosted into the background.
Thank you for your hard work. After discussions and feedback from family and friends, it's been suggested design needs to be more simple. Even though I love damask pattern, on a business card it looks a little over the top. I like the idea of a box around the stylized I and C. Want a darker background - maybe grey or light brown. Would like to see design with aqua. Mint green. Thanks again Brendan
#46 Don't mind this, however chocolate brown is too dark - would like to see it lighter. Simplify the font of Interior Culture. And slightly simplify the font of my name. Don't mind the green hue in design. Want a warm feel. Don't want white background. Describing the blue I like - it's like a greyed version of Tiffany Blue (blue-green/aqua). Try halving the design, keeping the top half. Want box around design but not Interior Culture or my name. Using this as a business card and will then develop other stationery from there. Thanks for your entries Brendan.
#49 & 48 Stylized I and C too similar to a white goods manufacturer here in Australia. However, maybe simplify a little and box it. Don't like hues being used. Want a warmer feel to background. Simplify font for Interior Culture and slightly simplify font of my name. Don't mind hues used in design #46. Thanks for your entries.
#52 Not into swans. Don't want white background. Chroma is too high. Don't mind the greenie-mustard hue in design #24 and #33. Maybe try that as background colour. Thank you