Thanks BRANDit. This heading in the right direction. At this stage I feel emphasis or accent should be more on "inspire" than tribes. Please see my general comments for more guidance too. I thought it might help for me to point out other designs of yours that I like Think Say Records (7th version) Lifestyle by design (8th version) I.O. Design Thanks again. Nikk
Thanks Tommy. Its too symmetrical for me. For that reason I prefer your first one. "Inspire" is moving up, out, a fire or spark or something a bit different. I am very keen to see something different with the words too.... Please see general comments in "Contest Discussion" as well. :)
Can I ask you to play a bit more with the idea of changing the "i" like you have done in #16
Could you try placing >>>> Inspire above >>>>. Tribe So they fit together well and the dot on the 'i' in 'tribe' is made to look like its lighting up the 'i' in 'inspire' (or something like that... And, perhaps 'tribe' could be the same colour as the 'i' in 'inspire'.... Or tribe is black and 'insp re' is burnt orange Or whatever you think!! It doesnt have to be burnt orange.. red or deep burnt orange or a combination could be good.
I hope this detail helps and doesn't confuse!! Keep up the great work. Thanks, Nikk
Thanks Tommy. They are a little too round and symmetrical. What i LIKE about your designs are they look a hand drawn. The top 3 designs I have chosen as they have good colours, a sense of people and energy. Are you able to do something like a 'calligraphy brush' version of the people?
Also, could we try #79 without the lines/heads at the bottom please - so it would be a circle with the flame and only the arms and heads going up?
Thanks Tommy. This is becoming tough!! I really like your new design. Can you do #110 with inspire in bold please. Like the others have done. Could you also try inspire bold and in burnt orange too please? THANKS. Nikk