Thanks for your submission!
First off, I'd love to see this image with the cyan color scheme (see the comment on the competition earlier today). I also like the way navy blue has shown to soften some of the blacks - think you can make it work?
Could I see the fonts altered to a more pointed or strong font - like a sharp times new roman.
Also, all caps seems to be more appealing, with a bigger lead letters: InsideOut.