I like the impact of logos #10 and #7. I think I'd like to see you simplify the look a bit by toning down some of the stars and swirls surround the text. Any chance of adding the year "2012" to the logo? Great start.
I don't know if it's possible, but there is a famous landmark in our community that has a very distinctive architectural appeal. I'm wondering if it's possible to incorporate some sort of representation of that image into the logo? Take a look at this website and let me know what you think. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jesse_Hall