Hi, thanks for putting so much effort into the design of your logo! Just a few things: 1) Instead of having 2 blocks with 'I' and 'W' on it, maybe an eye chart would be better. 2) The little girl on the right, maybe give her a ponytail and dark brown hair and a pink shirt. I don't really like yellow. 3) Maybe make the book a different colour - sage green? 4) Slogan at the bottom in lower case with '&' instead of 'and' so that the font can be larger and it's easier to read. Love that you incorporated the contact lens into the logo :) Thanks heaps!
Thanks heaps for making those changes - looks great! Just waiting to hear back from family and friends to see which ones they like the most. Thanks again! All the best!