#15 I like the overall dynamic . . . but it's probably too wide and too tall. The graphic is also a bit generic. It doesn't really speak to information. It would be nice to see something that directly relates to the group's mission. The group's name may need to go on two decks—which means the tagline might have to go.
The bar between the two decks separates two halves of our name. Let's try without. The graphic became even busier without telling a story that I understand. It has to communicate something about us at a glance.