Arlont,
I really like your creativity. Try to include the Slogan. Revive IT! Advance IT! Enjoy IT! Keep them coming. I am really excited to see what else you have in store. Please do not be discouraged by the 2 I placed in the "Not Interested" group. I liked the text but not the graphics to the left of them. Perhaps to many colors or to flowery or just to complicated. I cannot put my finger on it. I would like to see some ideas from you in Reds, Grays and Blacks.
Keep them coming and good luck in the contest!
Thanks,
Brad