#358 could you pls try this with other colors such as orange, or whatever other fresher/younger color? could you use more "rounded" fonts? maybe also handwriting type of font for the "everywhere you go"
#385 we don't like the font too much, would you try some others, more lisible yet rounded also would you work a bit around adding a ".com" even if you have for this to get rid of the tag line other colors are also welcome
Could you pls play a bit more with your entry 385? - we don't likle the font for infinite, could you pls try another that would more look like the one of #358 - maybe try dark grey for the font - character: the blue looked to cold to people, and the 385 has the "pillow" that in green looks a bt like a leaf Could you play with other colors, maybe trying to make it look more feminine, yey not overgirlie? - can you pls try a version with character on the left and infinite on the right, both on the same line?
Hi dear, thanks again for the modification, it is getting much better
however, could you please do some extra changes?
- the character looks a bit "flat", could you give it some volume, or gloss to make it look less flat? - could you maybe slightly reduce the size of the infinite hotel and add at the end a ".com" and maybe try several font for that, including one in handwriting type?
- and also try one with another fresh color such as maybe lime?