Can we try the people just slightly bigger but not as big as #218. Something in between. One with the window and one without after the adjustment. I think this will be the last request I hope.
Decided the original text/font look best. Thank you - Debbie
This seems to be the favorite artwork. I like the text art but I’d like to see one or two more different variations on the text art if possible before we make our final decision. Not just the font but the look. Maybe three interconnected lines? You have a good eye for this. One issue to consider is if we embroider this will the Alliance get lost due to its slenderness . Hope that made sense. -Debbie
Fantastic. I like the that you displayed the gentleman’s head turned to look at the individual in the wheelchair. It makes a difference in the mood of the scene. Thank you. - Debbbie
One little touch up please. The gal in the wheelchair holding hands with the guy looks awkward. Can their hands be more like the two holding hands in 226? And can the wheelchair be ever so slightly more visible? Thank you Debbie
Can you add a fourth person into this one. We like the diversity of reflected in these individuals but would like to compare with four standing figures.
Could you also provide another one with the fourth person on the right in a wheelchair? Thank you. - Debbie
Can you make the figure on the right in this look more like a female for comparison? Maybe change the hair but leave the rest alone. Thank you. -Debbie
Could we see this scaled like #173. They look a little larger compared to that one. Also can they be moved to the right so they are offset like that one too. Thanks.
Could we see this with a fourth person. I like the clarity of the individuals outlines in this better than the individuals in the other graphic with the four people. Some our group wants three people while others want four. It may have to do with the clarity. Thanks I appreciate your flexibility. - Debbie
I like the four people on this one. However I think they could be improved by sharpening their outlines. Hope that makes sense. For instance, the two guys shoulders are clearly defined on one side but hulky looking on the other. The girl on the rights waist could be better defined, things like that. Not sure you can do that or not.
Thank you. I’ll show this to our committee. Although the impression I get of these is children. The other designs you sent 216, 217, and 218 look more like adults.
Many liked this revision for its simplicity. However, many liked the people in design #173 who were holding hands but felt the four people in that made it crowded. Is there a way to blend the concepts by having these simpler people holding hands without it appearing childish? Thank you for your consideration. - Debbie
Everyone likes your revisions to the original design. Some are still concerned with the people in the design. In this design they felt four of them made the scene to busy. Can this be reduced to three people in this style that give the appearance of being adults? Thank you - Debbie
Thank you for this variation. I think the group will like the one where the people are holding hands better because these residents have known each other for 20+ years. However, these individuals may print on apparel better. I’ll seek the groups opinion. - Debbie
Yes, but I like #173 more with fewer colors. This design is very elegant and I anticipate the committee liking this simplified design version. - Debbie
In addition to removing the birds in a revision can you also put the words Independent Living together on one line. Many in our group have expressed they don’t want Independent emphasized in the designs. Thank you so much.
Thank you for updating the design. Let me show it to the others and get their feedback. Could you provide the same design without the birds just for comparison?
How about trying the logo with "independent living" in the same font, above "alliance. So, the focus is on Independent Living. Also, can you remove the birds? Thank U!
We haven’t received any revised designs from you in a while. We’d love to see any revisions to this design or any new design concepts you have thought of.
Many of us thought this was beautiful but felt it would be difficult to print on apparel and the numerous colors would increase printing costs.
Thank you for your submission. This is very nice. Is it possible to make the people all adults? The housing project will be for adults with disabilities not families. Thank you for your consideration.
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Upon Client request the Designer is required to provide the following logo variations:
Black & White
Solid Colors (if the logo contains gradients or other effects). Although I don’t think this logo has gradients.
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Decided the original text/font look best. Thank you - Debbie
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Could you also provide another one with the fourth person on the right in a wheelchair? Thank you. - Debbie
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We continue to have a small group of people who still aren’t quite satisfied with the people in the scenes. Can you try a few alternatives?
Also could you show us a few alternative text style concepts for comparison?
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Many of us thought this was beautiful but felt it would be difficult to print on apparel and the numerous colors would increase printing costs.
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