Independent Living AllianceLogo Design Contest

Less busy with the roof

Thank you.

Changed text to dark blue and smaller Alliance

Could we try this text in the darker blue?

To busy I believe with the triple peaks. Thank you though for your efforts. - Debbie

Like these hands much better. Less obtrusive and they give the illusion they wrap around from behind. Thank you.

It looks better to me. I’m thinking on apparel the green and orange text would not show up as well. Could we try this with all blue text and with Alliance being a very slightly smaller font size. Thank you for being so accommodating with our requests.

Thank you for these adjustments. We’ll review the event alterations you made. - Debbie

Updated Indepent Living on first line

Still thinking these hands are to prominent. They seem to give the appearance of leaves rather than hands, and overpower the rest of the design.

Better without the second ring of yellow. I think I forgot to request that Independent Living be on the same line. Some of our committee don’t want the word Independent so prominent. I apologize I thought Ihad let all the designers know. - Debbie

updated #181

Can we see this with a solid sun. These rays might not show well on apparel and give off a slightly religious vibe. The two yellow might cause an increase in printing cost can we try just one.

Another fun concept might be to try adding a few sun rays to the outside edge replacing the lighter yellow circle. Not big, subtle, but enough to show up in print. Maybe the rays could imitate the arms of the orange and green people to tie them in? - Debbie

Thank you for this new submission. My first impression is the hands overpower the rest of the design and make the design to busy. Maybe they are too abstract and need to be simpler, or they create too many colors with the light and dark green, or need to thinner/smaller??

We haven’t received any revised designs from you in a while. We’d love to see any revisions to this design or any new design concepts you have thought of.

I reactivated this design because I think some in our group would like this concept.

Are you able to incorporate some people into this design style?

Appreciate you for providing more designs based on our requests. This one looks a little to busy/crowded.

This looks nice.

Thank you for the additional designs.

updated

Another request. Could we see this with the window, but the hands removed and replaced with people. It’s not necessary to retain the circle. We like the building you are using with the sun behind it. Thank you for your flexibility.

Removing the leafs might able to incorporate buildings in it

Sure

Instead of a window what about people

Not sure if a building could be somehow incorporated in this design.