Could you create a revision to this and #195 with each word on its own line. Putting any combination of two words on the same line increases the text area but reduces the artwork. If independent is on a line by itself it appears over-emphasized. Thanks this will give us a good comparison. So far from the survey most people like the three armed version but I’d like to see this change on the two armed version as well. Thank you. - Debbie
Thank you. I realized after I wrote my comment about two arms per individual it would be the diamond shape you already created because of the space needed for the second arms. I was looking at the slightly rounder effect given off with one handed individuals. I do see you added some white space around the house so let me compare to the others. Thanks again- Debbie
I have to say I like the earlier designs better after looking at these more. I think these are to busy and the house gets lost to the eye due to the swirl pattern.
Thank you for this new concept. I like you are experimenting with alternate ideas. I think, however, this will make people think of water/milk jugs, least that was my first impression. - Debbie
Thank you for your rapid response. I think this text will please those that had concerns. I don’t know which style I like better, the people with both arms, or the quirkier one armed people. I like them both :)
Thank you for the an updated design model. I’m liking it. Can you show us this on a white background and reduce the font size of “Independence” so it doesn’t overpower the graphic for comparison? And one with “Independent Living” on one line. Some in our group would like to see what this looks like with less emphasis placed on “Independence” for comparison? Thank you for your consideration, - Debbie
Sorry just saw #105 and 106. The house detail seems to get diminished in those similar to #99/100. The people are softer but not as attention grabbing as in this.
Everyone liked the vIbrant color of those but felt the house was not reflected as sharply in those. Everyone liked the people in this and #90, 88, and 87. This put me in mind of a compass and held the meaning of navigating our way. Do you have softer looking characters as well just for comparison?
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Also i've uploaded new designs with the three armed, please check #206 #207.
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Also #143 on white background.
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I should have been more precise about what I meant about softer people. I meant softer edges/outline/arms of the people.
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Please check #99 #100 for an update design.
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