Could you space the letters out a little more on 53, drop the Hosted Solutions down a tiny bit and use a different (small) cloud proportioned on the top right above the d+s. (not tte clouds shown)
I like the cloud in the example logo I sent with the brief, though I cannot use that.
Also pls try a different blue (as per the logo sent) for InCloud font.
Hi Ray, entry 89 though darker blue please (see designer Comisetas No.80 for colour example). Also cloud raised higher above the top of the 'd' height. 'Hosted Services' to span the length from the 'I' to the 'S'. Although I havent requested this within the brief it would be great if you could actually get 'Hosted Business Services' in that space without it being too small. The slightly darker colour and boldness of 'Hosted Services' in entry 87 is preferred.
Ray, its a VERY close call between the first two/three entries of this competition. I would place 162 joint first if I could.
On entry 162 could you pls change the colours around so the blue used on the 'In' is the colour on the font used for the cloud...and vice versa. I would just like to see it.
The outline of the cloud over the 'ds' may then need to change colour. Not much longer to go now - the comp ends in 12 hours.