These are growing on me.
58, could you make the 'Hosted Services' tag line clearer/bolder as you have in Entry 60 and also very slightly bigger. Could you change it to 'Hosted Business Services' spanning the length of InClouds.
The font for InClouds on 58, 59, 80, can you mirror the font on the logo example that I posted up to offer designers an idea of what I was looking for. I just like that font, which is similar to what you used but more rounded.
59 & 80, same treatment as to be used for 58 for the Hosted Services tag line.
Can you use the same cloud shape and 'colour' from 58 to replace the cloud image in 60.
Thank you.