Please let me know if you'd like any revisions. Hopefully I'm headed in the right direction. You indicated that you liked the cartoony look, so this is how I interpreted it. I'd be happy to change whatever you want changed to improve my design.
You're the only one that actually added the cartoony dimension. Thank you for that, I love it! My colleague will be here in about two hours so I'll give you more feedback then. I hope he finds he professional enough! Could you try making other simple characters to give us a wider panel of what you can do, I'm sure that would help you reach top 5 ;)