I would change it a bit more to be honest. Can you alter it more in your final draft before sending us the file please. We can do this through email. Thanks!
I really like this one. The girl is great and the writing is awesome as well. Can you try taking some inspiration from the other artists and incorporate the girl in the water with a sunset please! Thanks!
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best regards
mumul
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