I like this idea but I'm not fond of the little details of the stars and lines that make up the exhaust. Can you try a version where the words "RETAIL TECHNOLOGY" is reversed out of a larger solid exhaust. Also, make sure you use all 3 color gradients indicated in the creative brief.
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal #303 #304 #305 and #306, let me know your thoughts.
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Jefry
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I submit a new designs proposal. I am open for feedback, dont hesitate to let me know. Your feedback is very useful.
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Jefry