#11 looks interesting. I like the concept. The people gathered round is nice.. but a bit too techy looking for me. I wonder if that concept could be expounded upon- maybe some variation of it that looked more friendly and loose... not so tecnical looking
I still like this concept... It's just too dark and heavy feeling. Looking too industrial. It needs some fun and brightness and loosening up of the rigid feel of heavy black line art.
I'm not sure that would work but if there was some way to loosen it up bit so that it just feels more innovative, bright, energetic and not so technical.
That may not be possible... but I like the concept for sure.. just look wise, too technical and industrial... thanks!