I like the vibrant colors. Maybe now we have gone a little too far. Can you try some versions with just two colors? Perhaps "I Turned" as one color and "Pro" as the other color?
On #19 can you try the "I Turned" in silver and the "Pro" in teal? Then trying to make the "I Turned" a little smaller than the Pro? And maybe try going with a bolder font in general.
I appreciate your other designs are brighter which I suggested but I think they are getting a little too busy for us.