i spaceLogo Design Contest

happy to adjust more but thoughts on this?

I cannot copy another designer but I can adjust the eye to be more muted and try to get the effect you want.
carol

sorry - just looked at some of the other suggestions - the blue eye has actually got a slightly smaller dark pupil and the blue is less bright, with 2 slightly larger reflective spots that are grey rather than white. Does that description help?

thank you for your help with other variations - I think this is still the best, but can't quite sign off on it yet. I think the eye may be a bit too dominant. Several other designer entries used an eye image that was more muted (still blue but slightly larger pupil with 2 light reflection spots)- could you use that one instead?

Did you want me to try any other variations on this?

incorporates it but seems busy. will think more later.

there is still a link with the font and colors . but maybe can think of a way. will look again tonight.
Carol

looks good, but that heavier text variation was abandoned in the main company logo, so don't really want to go back to that. However, the larger letter i and blue might work on your other designs?

looks fine in blue, and certainly creates a corporate link with the main company logo . downside is that it's no longer as clearly an eye, which is a pity as your first design was more obvious. Is it either-or or can you think of a way to get the best of both?

using text from logo also. just a variation to consider.

hope this is what you want. the outline around the S logo is navy - can change to black if you prefer. Let me know. the new files worked fine.
carol

Hi Carol. Hopefully I have now uploaded .ai and .eps versions of the logo. Can the graphic go inside a darker pupil - the whiter areas of the logo graphic distract from the full eye effect

I would need the vector or eps file of your logo to make this work better.
Carol

the file you uploaded was a jpg... do you have the .eps file of that? the jpg is bitmapped.

OK will adjust tonight

vector file containing the graphic has been added
could the i and space be a little closer together?

Yes, if you provide it in vector format and note that you own the rights to it.
Carol

Nice idea. Could the pupil include the original company graphic to keep continuity?