I killed you in my mindLogo Design Contest

How about this improvements ? I hope you like it more.

thank you for your interest...you're very talented I've no doubt you are extremely busy

We’d like to try it

just to clarify... do you want to remove the blood tomake it less violent ?

we love the font - wish we could have 2 logos -the choices are really difficult - the only hesitation we had was thinking about the gun violence push back we might have- but the message is about the initial rage reaction to the dialing it down - that's how this whole thing started- we've already got orders from bars for t-shirts and they haven't even seen the logo yet- we had thought of perhaps the x's for eyes sans the blood like you had in one of your first submissions...what do you think?

more grunge font

Sorry for late respond.....

I was very busy in the last few days.

I will send the revisions asap. thanks for your patience

Hello there - we haven’t heard back from you - we love the design but do need it tweaked -

oh and if you would incorporate red white and navy blue

hey there would really like to see a few revisions - you definitely made the message universal-its about saving the rage and moving on-that burst of anger that is quickly moved to the mind, dismissed and forgotten - I KILLED YOU burst of emotion with the 'in my mind' disclaimer covering all rages from road to break up - a color distinction as well as the font size would be helpful in picking up the message instantly -thanks

could we incorporate more blue? the preferred color scheme is red white and blue...have to say that out of the gate 'you got it" everyone laughs as soon as they see the logo - excellent response- its all about attitude and not getting your buttons pushed

The imagery wasn’t as obvious as the other variation you submitted that had us laughing out loud

The K shooting the i was hilarious-Bold I Killed You with the subtle ‘in my mind’ underneath was perfect