I saw your new one and revisited the first one-the message needs to be more universal-its about saving the rage and moving on-that burst of anger that is quickly moved to the mind, dismissed and forgotten - I KILLED YOU burst of emotion with the 'in my mind' disclaimer covering all rages from road to break up - a color distinction and/or font size would be helpful in picking up the message instantly
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Making it humorous, which the intent