Hello dear Dave Mason,
Thanks very much for the great feedback.
Sure i will work some revisions for your appreciation. In this phase "Selection", only 1st ranked designer can submit changes.
Can you put me 1st for sometime please so i can submit my designs when they are ready? After that you can re-rank again.
Anything more you may need feel free to ask please.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João