Hey Aragon- What if we added an abstract 'planet' shape (maybe a partial planet, be creative) to the left hand side, pull the light streaks back a bit so they touch on the surface of the planet.
Sorry I didn't explain very well. Can you make the Hungry Planet text larger in relation to the hand and streaks of light to give the overall logo more balance between the vertical and horizontal dimensions. You could even tinker with making the hand a bit smaller and positioning it in the top right hand corner (above the word Planet) with the finger pointing downward more than it is now.
Yes, that should make it distinct enough from the original artwork. Can we improve the horizontal vs. vertical dimensions (make the hand smaller relative the the print, or increase the size of the print and reposition it a bit. You could tuck the hand a bit closer, and pull the streaks in a bit to the center if needed.
Maybe try repositioning the hand so the forefinger is the source of the light waves in the way that Michelangelo's Sistine Chapel 'finger to finger' touch is done,
Understand on achieving originality - but try to stay as close to this as possible. One final color change. The light spectrum begins wit the blue, then green, then red. Important for the logo to get that order correct. THX!
You're killing it man! Good stuff. One final request. Can you add an 'amber' streak, and maybe give a few of the stars a little color! You're the clear winner at this point.
Hi Twozone. Can you add some 'stardust' around the streaming light to test the effect it would have. Also, can you do a variation on the colors of the streams do a blue (at bottom), green (middle) and red at top?
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Understand on achieving originality - but try to stay as close to this as possible. One final color change. The light spectrum begins wit the blue, then green, then red. Important for the logo to get that order correct. THX!
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You're killing it man! Good stuff. One final request. Can you add an 'amber' streak, and maybe give a few of the stars a little color! You're the clear winner at this point.
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You're nailing it! One last request. Can you curl the red sweep around in a partial circle on one version.
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