Make the middle streak REALLY GREEN :-) Reduce the gap between the middle and lower streak even more. They can be equidistance between all three. And please do one variation where the blue streak never crosses the globe, but stays above it. It may be that we go back to the original but I would like to see a visual where we're not crossing the two lines. And finally, can you do one variation with our tagline below the line at the bottom. "Lighting the Future of Food" THX!
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actually the middle streaks in #116 is in green color, but i think that is too light,
revision variation one - #123 without changing position of green streaks
variation two - #124 - lowering the green streaks a little but too much to keep the gap from white horizon
variation three,
about variation three, i made it in two version, #125 - shorten the blue lowest streaks #126 - remove the planet gap and blue line strike above
Hi HerDish- You are clearly in the lead here. Can you make three variations on #116. First, the middle streak should be green - it appears too yellow here. That would be variation one with no other changes. Variation two would be to have the three colors from variation one AND separate the green and the red streaks by lowering the green (middle) streak so that there is less overlap between the two and there is less space between the middle streak and the lower streak. The final variation is to keep the two changes (colors and separations) from variation one and variation two above AND change the lower (blue) streak so that it doesn't dip below (cross over) the edge of the globe. THX!
I really like the logo. Can you change the color of the streaks to reflect the spectrum (of our lights). The bottom streak should be blue, the middle streak should be green and the top streak should be red. THX!
here a revision of #109
moving two light and stars uppward, increase the size of horizon,
in case increasing the horizon, the green light one, is increasing too
#110 - moving two light and stars upper, with gold glow in hand #111 - higher #112 - more high #113 - more #114 - adding little glow to the light
You can move the light streaks farther still. Hand colors look great. Can you increase the size of the globe, and perhaps extend it a bit, so that it is more clear that it is the 'Planet' :-) You can manipulate the type face as needed.
Yes, the hand is much better now. Can you move the light streaks and stars upward (without moving the hand) so that they don't touch the globe in one version.
You've jumped ahead. I really like this design. Please create more separation between the globe horizon and the light streaks (similar to the clear separation in the #2 ranked logo). Also, the LIGHT STREAKS are the main graphic device, so could you reduce the size of the hand and in the process make it look like the streaks are being emitted from the upper part of the hand (fingers and upper palm). That way you won't have to reposition the light streaks.
Could you add a 1/4 global silhouette (like an arch) right above the type (Hungry Planet) and between the type and the streaks. Give the silhouette a slight glow. The idea is that the light is being spread over the planet.
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you may need to use this kind for some branding purpose
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what do you think about the size of glind and position
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please let me know if you need anything to change
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more green,
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more lowering the green streaks and blue light strike between
word and horizon
#127
#128 - with tagline
#129 - reposition the three lights
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Make the middle streak REALLY GREEN :-) Reduce the gap between the middle and lower streak even more. They can be equidistance between all three. And please do one variation where the blue streak never crosses the globe, but stays above it. It may be that we go back to the original but I would like to see a visual where we're not crossing the two lines. And finally, can you do one variation with our tagline below the line at the bottom. "Lighting the Future of Food" THX!
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actually the middle streaks in #116 is in green color, but i think that is too light,
revision variation one - #123 without changing position of green streaks
variation two - #124 - lowering the green streaks a little but too much to keep the gap from white horizon
variation three,
about variation three, i made it in two version,
#125 - shorten the blue lowest streaks
#126 - remove the planet gap and blue line strike above
please let me know
best regards
HerDish
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#116 #117 #118
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I really like the logo. Can you change the color of the streaks to reflect the spectrum (of our lights). The bottom streak should be blue, the middle streak should be green and the top streak should be red. THX!
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moving two light and stars uppward, increase the size of horizon,
in case increasing the horizon, the green light one, is increasing too
#110 - moving two light and stars upper, with gold glow in hand
#111 - higher
#112 - more high
#113 - more
#114 - adding little glow to the light
best regards
HerDish
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about your comment above, (moving stars and light upward)
please tell me which entries you mean to mention,
and i will revising it,
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thank you sir,
here a revision per your request,
#102 - original #93 adding separation between horizon and light, please let me know if separation not enough,
#103 - reducing hand size
#104 - reposition, and light through hand,
#105 #106 #107 #108 - trying a half hand, it make light is a part of hand,
please let me know what you want to edit, and how about stars? its okay the stars in that position, (above the light)?
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#92 #93 #94 #95 #96
more above is #92
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another entries with planet ideas,
#84 #85 #86 #87
#88 #89 #90
please let me know what do you think
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please let me know,.
the star and the light look like out from the hand,
is that too light sir?
thank you
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the hand with knuckles,
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we all cannot see each other entries contestant during blind phase
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will tweaking the hand today,
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please let me know
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anything can be change,
please let me know
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HerDish