Hi Enzo, I like that you're the first one that has incorporated the actual beret into the design. Others allude to it but yours is more obvious. On entry #39, can we make the beret a smidgen smaller to make the H more pronounced. This may be achievable by reducing the thickness of the H also.
Hi there. Not sure if you meant #39 or #48 as #48 was ranked higher. #79 & #80 - variations of #39 with the beret smaller. The beret in #80 is smaller than #79. #81 - a smaller beret version of #48. #82 - a different idea with the H as a badge/shield on a beret. I'll have a look at possible colours next.
Good morning Enzo. Congratularions for getting through with #82 as the top ranked. In terms of refining the design it would be great if I could get a design with a different font. Instead of a tall, thin letter with wide gaps, maybe a font which is shorter and looks 'sharper'. Could I also see one without the word beret. As you have incorporated the beret into the design, we may be able to get away without the word.
Thank you for ranking me first. Here are some typeface variations. #98 to #102 - five different typefaces without 'Berets'. #103 to #107 - the same typefaces with 'Berets'. #104 - with the name larger width then the beret.
Let me know what you think about the new versions.
Hi Enzo, great work on the logo, I think we are getting close now.
Can you adjust the emblem, move to the right, as if it was sitting directly over the left eye (looking in the mirror). With number #102, can you make sure the H within the emblem is full (no military style).
Also there is another designer who I really love the font and style of the H however I want to respect the rules of the competition and not steal his design. Can you inform me if we can still tinker once we get past the 'select winner' stage.
Some more versions with the batch moved to the right. #109 & #111 - have the badge straight on. #114 & #115 - with the badge angled. #116 & #117 - a variation of the badge with the bottom of the H extended down. #117 also has a slightly different shape to the beret on the left hand side.
Once you have selected a winner, the designer then submits final eps and jpeg files for your approval. You still have the opportunity to make alterations and the designer can make revisions to the final design until you are happy with the final design.