House of GreenLogo Design Contest

Dear Roos (are you Duthc?),

Thanks for your logo; although I must say I do not really like the design, I did like your portfolio (e.g. Heritage, Xio). This logo is too sweet and not really suited for the high quality and personal approach we deliver.
Is this something you can update?

Looking forward to it.
Sjoerd

Dear Sjoerd
Thanks for your comments. I have created some more designs as per your requirements. Let me know how did you find them.
And no I am not Dutch :)

Regards
roosdesign

ps what is the explantion/story of #74?

#74 Its a leaf that is divided into 4 parts and they depict the four seasons.... we can change the colors as needed. And there is a graphic representation of a bird over the leaf portraying 'life'.

#76 A symbolic presentation of green (greenery) a leaf and a bird... making it a pictorial form like apple. We can make use of 3 or 4 leaves as well...

Can you adjust to colouring of #69 and remove the little insects? What I like is that it is easy to comprehend and the name is clear to read.
Best,
Sjoerd

@ #76; can you add a bee?

Sure I will try!
Roosdesign

Should I still keep the clean look or you want it little busy?

I think the clean look is better, since we have to use the logo in many ways and forms.
What is your experience on that?

Yes, the cleaner and simple, the better it is. Makes it perceive by the target audience.
The logo should be resizable and still clean.

hi Roos,
Thanks for the update. I will discuss your design with my partners and expect to get back to you soon.
Best,
Sjoerd

Dear Roos,

The reason you are ranked third is because we like the spirit of your design: Bring life to the city garden.

Though, after discussion with our independent art director we would like to make the following comments to make the logo applicable for our business branding (website, store design, packaging, business cards, etc.)

* Font: we would like to see a more luxury font (something from the Times family)
* Picture; is there a way you make the picture a bit more luxury / chique? We think it is a bit too sweet now... (difficult to point out exactly)
* Form: Can you make a "store-sign" example of your logo (picture before 'House of Green")?

Tomorrow, 3 hours before the end of the final round we will have an internal discussion again.

Looking forward to your input!

Best,
SKAII-team

Hi Roos,
I think I like the first picture the best, but including the changes of the name.
The new picture is too complex, don't you think?
How does it look when you put it all in one line?
THanks,
Sjoerd

Entry #157 has the name in one line...is that what you are looking for?
#155 do you want me to add some colors in it?

Hi,
let's work from #155;
- what I am looking for is how the logo works on one line (picture(mark) before the text line 'house of green') and in a box (picture before test 'house of green' over two lines
- concerning colour use; perhaps a bright funny colour for the bird? just to see if it makes a difference.
Best,
sjoerd

Dear Roos,

Thank you very much for your efforts!

We are currently in discussion with our investor team to decide with whom to proceed.

If you have any further comments or ideas please feel free to contact us.

Best regards,

SKAII team

Thanks!
I am sorry I couldn't do any changes that you last suggested because It went into the judging mode.

Roosdesign

hi Roos,
i will put you first so you can update ok?

ok no problems, I will be able to do update then.

#199 All in one line
#200 The lettering in a box shape
#201 Added some greens inside
#202 Changed the flower design and added some colors
#203 with Luxury font