So, if we select this as the 'winner', then we can talk to you about other options as well?
Sorry, it's our first time on this platform; and not sure how the next steps work
Thanks!
I like the yellow light from the lighthouse in #270. Just trying to look over your other designs and see how they have changed!
and we like the varying ocean colors in #270 better too
I like this lighthouse - where it is taller and skinnier; but the stripes need to go in the other direction like your prior pics.
What I meant about the lighthouse stripes was that in some of the versions, the white stripe lined up a bit too well with the rope circle; but in that last one they did not and I liked it better when they did not blend in as much.
Husband likes this sun where it is lower in the picture
Hello, I have adjusted design #272 according to your latest requests, I redraw the lighthouse like the one in the photo you sent me, leave me your thoughts, thank you!!
It's okay, no problem, I'm going to work on the lighthouse and the other things that you told me, if I lower the sun a little, but I can lower it a little more if you want?
We like the taller lighthouse; but would prefer the base to be smaller / less significant. I also like it where the white stripe does not line up with the rope.
I like the woman and dog closer to the center of the frame like this one; but don't like the red - prefer the silhouette look
I like the kite-boarder on the right side of the sun.
Did you lower the sun a little?
We like the colors a lot in this one
Okay, so, it looks like time sneaked up on me and we selected you!! You were actually our favorite; but the other design was a close second, because we really like the beach area.
So, I'm glad I kept the rankings as they were, and we get to work with you after all - thanks for all your attentiveness!!
So, we are really still liking both you and the other designer! Some things we prefer with the other option is the larger beach area & the lighthouse not sitting in the middle of the ocean.
Can we extend the beach down some into the name area? I know the name won't 'pop' as well; but several really like the look of the beach in the other one.
Maybe bring the lighthouse down a little and put the grass only on the side opposite the lighthouse, to give more 'beach'?
How about doing a blend of green and tan - the lower / shorter grasses are green (& less blue green) and the taller grasses with seed heads are more tan
This one looks a little crisper; and i like the yellow reflection.
Like the calm / serene feel here
Liking this one
Maybe try a silhouette of woman and dog sitting?
Can you un-withdraw one of your last ones with the more orange sky? I think hubby still may prefer less purple and really likes that orange sky. He liked comparing the 2 options.
Everything else you told me is perfect, I will do it, in the case of the font I will try another one, but I tried with italics and the hook does not work, but I can look for a similar softer font and have the hook in A work.
Liking the smaller kiteboarder and better focus on scene
Husband prefers less purple - maybe a little only at the top
Prefer a straight horizon - still looks like there is land on the horizon
Like the woman walking slower
Don't like the sun rays - they compete with the light house
Husband would like to soften the Beach Life font maybe? But we both like the hook and I'm not sure a different font would look right with the hook
Can we shrink the kite-boarder a little to put the focus more on the beach scene?
And maybe add a little more purple to the sky?
Maybe slow / narrow the stride on the woman / dog to make it more relaxed?
Also, the horizon should be clean, other than some clouds. (no trees on the horizon)
How would it look with a small, round sun slightly higher, just above the horizon; and with a reflection on the water. Basically, more of a sunrise than a sunset. Sunrise on the Outer Banks is on the ocean side and sunset is on the 'sound' side. Hatteras island is a narrow sandbar; and you can see both from our beach house; but we are more on the ocean side.
How about taking out the umbrella & either make the lighthouse larger or the sun smaller. But Husband really likes the focus on the sunset; so probably make the lighthouse larger - they just seem out of proportion.
And make the woman & dog smaller.
Trying to put the focus on the serenity of the ocean sunset
Hello, - thanks for that info; but I didn't see your comment till just now. I did extend the contest, because we are very undecided between the top 2 designs!!!
Hello, just for your information, in the next phase (selection) only the design classified in 1st place will be able to upload reviews, if you want to see reviews you will have to momentarily move the designer to first place, I hope it will help you.
The idea of the person sitting on the beach with his dog is his idea, I have seen other designers using that idea, if it is his there is no problem and I will use it, but if it is someone else's I cannot use it.
I'm liking this one a lot. The only add I could think of would be to try someone sitting on the beach with their dog instead of walking. I like the energy of this one; but wondering if the serenity of that silhouette would balance the energy.
Hello, if you want to see something else, let me know! I haven't added anything on my own to avoid burdening it, I think it's more harmonious that way.
Liking this one a lot
But would prefer the hooked on lower, like your others
Like the hook on the A
Also like seeing a reference to pet friendly - but don't really like the dog in the other one. Maybe show outline of someone walking their dog?
Would prefer seeing the Hatteras Lighthouse instead of the cabin in the background
here with the same original letter, but with a hook in the letter A in BEACH, the smallest kitesurf boy, only highlighting the sea and sunset, leave me your thoughts!
thanks - but we prefer the way you put the name in your original designs better. We prefer that Beach Life be larger than Hooked. And we didn't really see the hook on the H initially either.
I like the orange sky and sunset on this one
We prefer the orange sky in your other ones. Don't really like how prominent the guy in the beach chair is. Could shrink the kitesurfer also, so it's less 'busy'.
Liking it overall; but prefer less focus on the people; Prefer no palm trees (we're too far north). Cabin reminds me more of lakehouse than beach house
Not liking the people being more prominent than the scene. Also remind me more of a lake house than a beach house. Palm trees are beachy; but we are too far north really
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Sorry, it's our first time on this platform; and not sure how the next steps work
Thanks!
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and we like the varying ocean colors in #270 better too
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What I meant about the lighthouse stripes was that in some of the versions, the white stripe lined up a bit too well with the rope circle; but in that last one they did not and I liked it better when they did not blend in as much.
Husband likes this sun where it is lower in the picture
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I like the woman and dog closer to the center of the frame like this one; but don't like the red - prefer the silhouette look
I like the kite-boarder on the right side of the sun.
Did you lower the sun a little?
We like the colors a lot in this one
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So, I'm glad I kept the rankings as they were, and we get to work with you after all - thanks for all your attentiveness!!
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Can we extend the beach down some into the name area? I know the name won't 'pop' as well; but several really like the look of the beach in the other one.
Maybe bring the lighthouse down a little and put the grass only on the side opposite the lighthouse, to give more 'beach'?
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Not sure about this green. Maybe make it skinnier, so it is less distracting?
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What about changing out the leaves for some seagrass?
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Not sure of what is allowed; but I liked this one:
https://www.vecteezy.com/vector-art/33515691-girl-sitting-silhouette
& this one: https://www.dogshomepa.org/wp-content/uploads/silhouette.jpg
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https://help.logotournament.com/article/82-request-reinstatment-of-a-withdrawn-logo
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Like the calm / serene feel here
Liking this one
Maybe try a silhouette of woman and dog sitting?
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Husband prefers less purple - maybe a little only at the top
Prefer a straight horizon - still looks like there is land on the horizon
Like the woman walking slower
Don't like the sun rays - they compete with the light house
Husband would like to soften the Beach Life font maybe? But we both like the hook and I'm not sure a different font would look right with the hook
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And maybe add a little more purple to the sky?
Maybe slow / narrow the stride on the woman / dog to make it more relaxed?
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How would it look with a small, round sun slightly higher, just above the horizon; and with a reflection on the water. Basically, more of a sunrise than a sunset. Sunrise on the Outer Banks is on the ocean side and sunset is on the 'sound' side. Hatteras island is a narrow sandbar; and you can see both from our beach house; but we are more on the ocean side.
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And make the woman & dog smaller.
Trying to put the focus on the serenity of the ocean sunset
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Really liking your latest logo - thanks for listening and adapting so well!
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But would prefer the hooked on lower, like your others
Like the hook on the A
Also like seeing a reference to pet friendly - but don't really like the dog in the other one. Maybe show outline of someone walking their dog?
Would prefer seeing the Hatteras Lighthouse instead of the cabin in the background
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I like the orange sky and sunset on this one
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We are also pet friendly
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