Like the way your designs are going, the face is not exactly what we are looking for. Using your ideas and a more distinct hoody looking figure would be very interesting.
#51 is getting very close to what I think we are looking for. The face still needs some work so that it looks much more like a Hoody, look at the hood on #26 and somewhere in between that hood and what you have would work.
FYI our next contest will be to redesign the logo for www.notyourdaddysguncases.com ( take a look at whats there) open to ideas as we define the contest.