HomeVistaLogo Design Contest

Indeed this leads to a real improvement. #203 is perfect.

Hi, no problem, here they are, in four step smaller than the original, #203 #204 #205 and #206

Hi my friend,
one final request: we were wondering, if you could downsize the iris/pupil (eye) slightly (maybe in two or three different steps) to compare, if this improves the readability.
Thank you in advance

message got, you are right! Fair enough. I just try it out by my own.... ;-) The darker red is definitively better

And this one with white background.

And for the long rooftop across the two words, I'm afraid I can't do that, because another fellow designer already did that in "blind phase" of your contest. It would be against the rules and not fair for him if I do that composition. I really hope you understand the situation.

Thanks,
Edwin

Hi, here it is with darker red color

ok, we are really getting closer, still a very good approach.
a) could you please darken the red a Little bit, then it will fit better to the secacam logo. Pls try the red of your #193.
b) Then I would like to see the Logo on White Background.
c) and for the sake of the internal ongoing discussion: could you please try the logo (on black Background) once with a Roof spanning across Home and Vista completely.

thank you. I think, the other Version works better. Although the eye looks more harmonic in this version, overall the other one is more a logo-unit. Maybe it is because of the roof.

"the thicker one was more like a unit (except the chimney position)"

Could you explain me more what did you mean with "a unit" ?

Thanks,

and this with thicker rooftop

and here is with the exchange color between home and vista

sorry for the color, here is the revision with color match between the roof and word home

btw: the thinner line of the roof is not optimal, the thicker one was more like a unit (except the chimney position); maybe you have an idea?

I am still struggling a little bit, but I do not know exactly, why. Could you try to exchange colors: HOME in White and Vista in red? But leave the rooftop in red; btw: the red of the Roof is different to the writing, could you just adjust that, pls?

ok, was worth a try, but does not work. Especially when the logo is very small, it could more disturb than help; so we stick to the plain writing

or maybe this one

or this one?

or this one?

something like this?

or maybe with black seams

bricks in the rooftop area are too much

very nice. If you could try to do this with bricks in the letter s of HOME, but with grey seams...

Hi, here is the current ranked 2 design, with the rooftop.

This one with the roof top and brick texture. Please let me know what you think.

And this with bricks texture at the red letter like your request.

Hi, here is the new eye with my first entry

btw: #185 is really appealing. Just a silly idea: do you know the way, some houses in Europe are built --> with bricks.
--> http://www.zephram.de/blog/wp-content/uploads/2012/06/ziegelsteinmauer.jpg

If you type in the word
ziegelsteinmauer in Google and you do a Picture search, you will see, what I mean. Maybe you can give the red letters of "HOME" a kind of texture? Maybe worth a try?

Just a thought: could you take the eye of #185 and put it into your first Submission #12?

How about this one?

no red-eye, pls

I like the eye. But take care that the the lights in the pupil do not form a batman sihouette.
The arrows do not make sense in a logo. A simply good shaped eye which is also a readable "O" would better in my opinion. Rooftop + chimney: good!

Hi, I just submit some designs as the revisions, please have a look at them.

Thanks,

Hi, of course I'll do it, please wait for my next revision.
OMG, I forgot about it, he asked me before, please let him know that I'll do colors values and send him an email soon.

willing to work on it? BTW: my colleague Markus, who conducted the contest for "AKKU-Meister" asked me, to ask you for the description/values of the Colors, you used

if you would try to work on the "O" to achieve a better unit of Symbol and letter and combined with better readability of the word HOME, I belive it would be a promising Approach

I found the bolder letters of home better, to be honest.
I like the rooftop with the chimney. But the geometry of the chimney is not good (it looks unbalanced on top of the "H").
The letter "O"/the eye does not really work. The eye/the camera lens Needs to be carved out much better, it Needs to be more clear, that it still in an "O", but also an eye, which is watching/observng the house.

Hi, here is some improvement for my previous design, please let me know what you think.

Thanks,
Edwin

really good unit of writing and Symbol, unique combination