The bird has some very interesting style. I think it's a bit overpowering. Is there anyway to tie the HWB with it as one entity more and get the name up larger so it can be read easier even in small sizes.
Hi Kreative1, How exciting, Thank you thank you for all your efforts. We are down to just a couple now and our board is really engaged.
We love your stylized bird on 44 and 47still the best and the solid circle is very worldly together with the HWB. The one thing that I want to know if you would try is to change the typestyle of just the HWB to not be so blocky. I like the san serif but its feeling kind of clunky and a bit overbearing to us. We do like the strength with the softness of the graphic .
Does it ruin the layout if the name and slogan get a little bolder so its a bit easier to read when it's this small. I do see that we will be using it very small and we have an older demographic, so I want it to be very legible. Also did you try having the lower circle and HWB in a gray or black with red on top of circle and our name in red? Great job! Thank you for your time and energy. We are very excited. Laurie
Thank you so much for your variations, I'm sure you are getting crazy. would you mind doing one more please. Take the type from 86 and increase to page width and take the graphic with HWB and center on top.
in 92 the type is more interesting but I do think it loses something without them touching. When they connect it makes the graphic and HWB more as one unit.
Wow you have really created some great ideas, thanks again.
Thank you. I'm sorry I'm not the best communicator by email sometimes.
I don't think the HWB is working inside the bird very well, not strong enough.
I still like the bold HWB with the connected graphic in both the 2 color and 1 color versions. I'm just not happy with the typestyle. I feel it could be so strong as a unit.
If it sat on top of the larger type stacked format in 95, do you think it would work. I love how you had the bird tail wrap around the H in Homeopaths.
BTW why did you withdraw your others before we finished? You have a great design sense, please do what you think will work. I don't want to micromanage you. Thank you. Laurie
Hi Kreative1 Wow this is exciting! You are definitely in the top 2 and have really worked with us. Thank you.
I feel we are so close, I wanted to know if you would tweak a couple versions for us.
Layout in 104 is a good square version and 86 is a good horizontal version but I think your original typestyle in 44 is cleaner and fits very well with the design better than in 86 and 104. Please change type on both.
Next; ( I don't want to use the bird circle with HWB inside anymore)
The bird/circle and HWB side by side is soooo close. I'm sorry I'm having difficulty sharing what is and isn't working with graphic shape for me.
- I really like when the feeling of it is all one unit ( it would be very good for embroidery on shirts) - Lets keep it all one color red, no gray like in 44 ( type name can still be black and red) - thickness of the letters- I think we lost something when it was too thin, some of your originals had good strength, but the typestyle is too common or boring (see how some types are san serif but more interesting when extended or the shape of the letters, etc)
So with all that said if you can give me your best square layout (with graphic/HWB on top) and best horizontal ( for mastheads, etc)layout ( with full graphic/HWB on side) We will be ready to go for judging.
Please ask me any questions before you design if this isn't clear. I don't want you to do more work than is necessary. Thank you Laurie