We like the draftsman's lines, but maybe make them a little heavier and suggest more of a house shape. Can we see it without the tree & sky? Some of us think it looks like a seagull not a tree (though the concept is interesting). Can we try some different fonts? We like the "dictionary" look of the font in the example file we uploaded. Thanks for your submittal!
#21 is still our favorite of your designs, we'd love to see it with the draftsman's lines where they are now but a little heavier (black or grey is fine), and without the tree/sky portion. Also home.ology with a dot between the 2 parts, and lower case in a font that looks like something from a dictionary.. and still bold on "home" and less so on "ology" thanks so much!