Like the styling and the artwork but we are looking for some strong fonts for legibility and quick recognition. We also like the connection to the Hollywood sign from some of the other contestants. I would suggest we try and reduce the clutter and stick to your cool artwork like the wolf or Frankenstein but try to use the Hollywood sign font and then a creepy halloween...
I find it more clear and simple which is key. I think your Hollywood font is good at this point but maybe we try something stronger for the Halloween font. We also need to see this on black as it will be on t-shirts and we are concerned about the silhouette for frank or the werewolf when it is reversed?
For the werewolf version maybe you can try a silhouette moon behind him rather than the color and possibly fewer bats 1 or 3 is a good number. People need to see the font first and then notice the overall logo rather than see it all and try to figure out what is happening.
Thanks for the extra effort and it DOES look better.
I was withdrawn from the contest because they were saying my werewolf looked to close to another image, so I have redesigned my werewolf, hope you like this.
What a surprise to log on after dinner only to find that your #2 and #3 ranked logos are gone???
I really liked the other imagery and styling...
The stuff you have now is also very nice but the "Frank" character is that going to be ok?
We really like the #117 as a classic 60's type monster and as much as #116 is cool it is going to be tough to work and it is just a bit too busy. The wolf looks now like it has one arm growing out of his head which I am sure is not your intention.
We do like your art and are trying to figure out a clear direction to give you that makes sense...?
If you look at the #1 ranked logo at this point it is "tight" in the sense that it is not to big and will work on many applications. I was just looking at some Bone or skeleton type fonts that could possibly work for your entry #116 with the word Halloween, the Hollywood is GOOD and I would not change it. As an idea what about using a spooky skeleton font or using bones to spell Halloween and then integrating a skull as the O right in the center? It will be key to have this still legible but the idea is to integrate the icon into the font making it all one and harmonious.
#117 I would not dramatically change other than saying if you could tighten it up to more of a "badge" style and not so big this would be cool.
Yes this Frankenstein is fine. I have uploaded the revised looks you requested, please let me know if there is something you wanted to see that I didn't upload, thanks so much! FYI, I have enjoyed designing these for you, it has gotten me in the mood for my favorite holiday, I can hardly wait for haunted houses.