I like the w, I don't like the H- would like you to work on that some more, and would also like to see something more interesting done with hollingsworth - a wider cleaner (thinner) font might be good
GREAT IMPROVEMENT... I really like this logo.... I am not sure what I would change. Can we see a few different versions. Any other creative ideas you have. Please keep this as a contender!
I have come full circle and decided to choose this as the winner. I would like to make a few tweeks to the final design. I lwould like to see the font thinner or change it to the font on the second submission; I would like to see the water look more like water, possibly fade out. Thanks for your time and talent!