Regarding #43, I like the tree branch idea beneath Holiday. Would it be possible to expand on this idea & try to incorporate the shape of a side ways Christmas tree branch that the word Holiday forms out of?
The cardinal bird is cute but may not be the best fit of the objective of trying to visually communicate this product usage of scented holiday tree ornament.
Great question on the fragrance. The product is more about offering a scented, decorative ornament to scent the tree rather than specifying a pine fragrance. A tree scent will be offered but additional fragrance options will also be available.
An image of the tree in some fashion with the ornament definitely makes the visual connection with the product & usage.
I like the ideas but would like to tweak #61 & #45. I have a file I would like to send to you to better explain the suggestion. Do you have an email address or other way I can send the reference image to? There doesn't appear to be a way to attach a file to this comment area.
In addition for #61 & #45- can we try dropping the hanging ornament from the top of the H to form the letter O of inside it? The brown color on #61 will need adjusting for this concept
For transparency reasons we aren't allowed to share our email during an open contest, but you could use this site to upload and then give me the link: http://www.filedropper.com/
Thanks for the mockup, it definitely helps to understand what you have in mind. I'm uploading the revision. Let me know if there is anything you'd like to see changed or if I misunderstood anything. Thanks
Thanks for your quick reply! These are looking great. Like how this direction communicates usage. High 5!
For #66, a few revisions: -possibly a more simple font or different script that's not as cutesy for Scents -a little more springs on the tree, like on the end of the kind in #61
For #61: -try the same concept as #66 w using right side of H to hang the ornament from to go inside the O (can remove the pine cone). May look cool with the cursive font.
Uploading the cursive. This one was a bit trickier because the O is lowercase and slanted it doesn't leave as nice a space for the ornament to fit. I modified the O a bit to give the ornament more space.
(Also, #67 I modified the A to mimic the style of the H with the higher crossbar.)
#67 great idea on the cross bar. Can you try increasing the size of the tree needles a little? They get lost on this design but stand out on #68. One other thing that helps stand out is the color different. What if Holiday is red w the green tree part & scent is red? Trying to see how to achieve more contrast
That was quick! Def digging the round ornament more!
A few additional suggestions from our team: -love Holiday & the tree interaction with the ornament. Try tweaking the tree to more Christmas tree/pine/fir, as is may lean towards more palm tree branch style
-try a red rectangle with Scents in white. Sorry we don't have a better suggestion, just feel something with Scents looks off with the rest of the awesome design.
If we need minor tweaks to the design, are you able to do that?
Scents needs to be white. Can you please provide an AI or PDF for this logo?
Thanks so much for your creative work on this project! If we would like to touch base with you on future projects, what's the best way to make that happen?