Ho Ho SnowLogo Design Contest

Hello, here is my design. Revisions welcome.

(This comment references Entry #14)

I like #15. However, I think the following modifications would make it better...

1) would like to see the snow flakes in the letter O's removed
2) A little space between the "Ho" and "Ho"
(The word "Snow" could be expanded, so that "Snow" is a little wider than "Ho Ho"
3) There could be more snow pile(s)? ... careful on this, I'm not sure if this would be better or not.
4) The snow flurries could be expanded some

Thanks!

#16 - Good idea... I really want to see a good Polar Bear logo. Your bear just didn't look right to me.

Thank you for all the feedback! Will revise.

Thanks!

Anna

another idea with a polar bear :)

(This comment references Entry #26)

Thanks for your effort and entries! I'm having a hard time deciding which of your logos I like better: #27 (Polar Bear) or #25 (Snowman).

On #27 - I'd like to see the wording "Ho Ho Snow" a little clearer.
The problem with "Ho Ho" (in general / with your logos or any of the others by other designers) is that the letter "H" can look too similar to the letter "N" - especially if the lettering is kind of puffy. Maybe a solution would be to darken the outline around the letters (like in your #25). I just want to make sure the "H" is very clear. Also - there should be space between the two words "Ho Ho." (I see there is a little space already - maybe just a little bit more / maybe I'm being too picky!)

Also, I think the background is a little too dark. Maybe a little variation in the background, as the lighter glow-effect in the background - maybe something like Samuel Pires has done with #21 or Ilkay in #2.
#21's glow appears in the top half. #2's glow appears more left and bottom. My thought was a light glow around the logo instead.

I also think it would be better to have the hand moved off of the "O" - as I would like the logo not to be obstructed. Either the hand could be resting on the top/side or off completely.

Also - Regarding the "W" in "SNOW" - I'd like to see the bottom of the letter, instead of the little snow pile making the bottom of the letter. Also, maybe a little more snow on the ground, and a little bit (very little bit) more in the flurries.

Also - there is a single white dot (snowflake?) under the bear's arm, over the first "H" - I would like to see that removed.

Revised.

(This comment references Entry #33)

Thanks for the revisions....

Also, on #33 - can you give a nice dark edge to the lettering / it may be a little to bright (too much glow) around and between the letters. Also, can you lighten up the background a little... but not much.

And, maybe a little less snow flurry... I'd say between the last version and this one.

Thanks!

Hi there, let me know if you are happy with this latest revision of if you need more tweaks done, I'm glad to do them :)

Thanks!

Anna

(This comment references Entry #47)

another kind of glow

(This comment references Entry #49)

#50 - Thank you for the changes!

Can you make a modification on #50 to remove the pile of snow from the top of "Ho Ho" ?
Also - I think it might be better if the bear was bigger (less body?) ... similar to how you did the snowman in #25.

Thanks!

less body, more bear :)

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