I like both of these. Great initial designs. For #9, Can you try something a little darker feeling? I like the multicoloured font though! For #15 I like the hill shape carved out of the words. Can you extend that theme across the whole word "Hillside"? And, maybe make "Youth Drop In Centre" a little more prominent. Not much, just a little. Super start. I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work.
I still like #9 the best I think. #16 just went too far in the dark direction. Maybe something between the two? Could you please also experiment with #15? Could you try that hill theme carved out from the letters across the whole word please?
Thanks Denzu. Get some sleep man. No worries. #20 is nice. After I see the hills cut out across the whole word, it's nice, but I think it cuts a little high on the word. Maybe, keep the hills a little lower just to make sure the word Hillside is easy to read. Otherwise not bad. But, I'd still say out of all your work i like #9 the best. I'll rank it accordingly.
In my opinion #32 and #33 are your best yet. One thing that I think I'll need is to be able to use just the text from the logo at times. Could you make a version of #32 where the text is outside of the graphic that you made but still have the graphic to the side or something? (Good morning by the way, I hope you got some sleep. Here it's 8:42 AM. So, I'm just getting my day going.
Thank you very much! Helpful feedback and great ranking, I appreciate that. English isnt my native language, so I cannot unserstand exactly, what kind of mods do you need to see now. Text part + graphic part separated? Here is 17.00 now and Im working like animal :)
My friend brought up a good point for #36. The cross that you've included in the letter "H" may be a bit too up front or noticable. Could you try to make it more subtle so that it's not something that is noticed very easily? The reason for this is because we don't want to make people coming to our youth centre who aren't Christians feel intimidated. Thanks.
I wanna keep #37 and #38 in mind. Can you give me something a little more rock and roll? Something that doesn't look quite so perfect. Something that says teenager? Keep up the good work.
Here's an idea for #67. Can you do the word Hillside in this kind of text (link below)? The cross may not work in the "LL"s but that's ok. Maybe even then the "H" in the image part of the logo could be in this font too. I'f I'm overstepping my bounds by making this suggestion please let me know. Thanks
I'm just wondering if you can try the suggestion that I made in my last comment. I'll copy it for you here below:
Here's an idea for #67. Can you do the word Hillside in this kind of text (link below)? The cross may not work in the "LL"s but that's ok. Maybe even then the "H" in the image part of the logo could be in this font too. I'f I'm overstepping my bounds by making this suggestion please let me know. Thanks