I like this #6 idea. But, it feels a little too young to me. Can you make it feel more young-adult? Maybe darker colours would do that. Hope the feed back helps. Thanks for entering my tournament!
Thanks for making some more submissions. You know, I'm just not feeling this idea that much any more. But I really like your style. Would you mind trying to come up with something completely new? I'd really like to keep working with you. Thanks