I like the font a lot, the silhouette is too childish. If you want to submit more of a fit, toned sort of sexy abstract human body reaching out to the sky of your own version. Think toned, slim, not short and kids like stocky. It is to protray a very aspirational sophisticated casual lifestyle. Not goofy and I hope you take this the right way, I'm just trying to give as clear feedback as I can. It's more about spiritual debt than playfull. Thanks, I hope to see another try from you.