Thanks for the entry. It definitely shows the angle I shoot from. Good. It's simple. Good for printing. The sports reference is subtle. I like it cuz it's different.
But,..it is boring. I want a logo that jumps out at you and says, wow this rocks. Also need the slogan on there. "Rise Above the Rest"
Thanks for the input Jeff. I can certainly add the slogan, but can you suggest an element that would make it less "boring"?
As a design principle, I think you'll find most logos are boring because they favor company recognition over any particular aspect of it's services. The idea being your ads and website will explain the details of how much your service rocks, and the logo would be a simple and easily reinforced take-away for your prospective clients to remember.
In the meantime, I'll give it some thought, and I welcome any suggestions you might have.
Thanks for the awesome revisions! regarding your earlier questions: HSV does not show commercial video for golf courses or realtors. (good idea but we do not do that right now. Regarding "Boring": you resolved that issue. :-)
Things I like: The circle around the logo The slogan with the extra text at the bottom. dual sport reference
Things to change: Slogan color: can you change it to white instead of grey so it will stand out more. I'd Like the H,S,V to be slightly larger than the rest of the word. ----------------- I like the logo, but the biggest issue I have right now is that I can't take the HSV and easily separate it from the rest of the logo. I need to be able to put HSV on the dvd scoreboard or anywhere else that there is not much space so that HSV can stand alone and people know who it is.
Thanks for the quick turn around. I like the additions. Idea: Can you put the HSV inside the circle also, running the length of the field? So the HSV would have a 3d look like the field does.
I certainly can add the letters to the field, but I do feel obliged to warn you, this is getting very busy. You may be disappointed at the loss of detail when it is reproduced at smaller sizes.
Also, I included the HSV corner bug because you asked for something recognizable you could put on the video screen. Have you changed your mind?
You seem to be moving in a different direction, and thats cool. If you're seriously considering any of my designs, I'd be glad to repost them, but eight variations on an apparently impossible theme was getting to be a bit of overkill.
Please let me know if there was a particular style you really wanted, I'd be glad to repost.