I like the idea, but I think it would look better with the portrait screen (the standing one) more to the right. I don't like the font very much, too thick.
I like your design, but it is too much. Can you try to make it simpler? I tried to sketch it. And then you should try not to centre the portrait screen, but move it a little out of center to the left. I think that would work better.
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