I like what you did the E's! Actually, I like it a lot. Also the fact that the HET lines with the screen outline. However, the landscape screen (green) has different dimensions than the blue one. The blue ne is correct, but seems (16:9). Can you make them both in that dimension? Can you try to leave out the top blue line in the green rectangle?
I like how you managed to put the HET and the CUL so that the T and the L are on the same line, but maybe it works better if the spacing of the CUL are the same as the rest of the word TUURSCHERM. This means the C and H do not line anymore, but maybe that's only good. Can you try? At the same time can you leave out the two lines above and under the R, or maybe just ne of them. I would like to see the effect.
This is the idea, but it doesn't work - too many lines. Can you try to do the right line of the portrait screen on the R instead of the C? And you can you try if different colors for the two screens would work?
See what I changed to make my illustrate what I mean. Can you also change the outlining a little so the T (from HET) and the L (from CULTUUR) line. For this you have to shift the letters from HET a little.
Thanks, but I prefer the use as earlier 'Het Cultuurscherm', so with the 'Het'. The box (in red) does not represent a screen, because now it's a rectangular. A screen has other dimensions, can you try again? Now we play around with a landscape form, can you try what happens if we also use a standing screen? Maybe with lines in an other colour?
I very much like the simplicity and clarity. I have a suggestion : the screens we use are landscape (rectangle like suggested by you) and portrait (standing screen, poster mode). Can you try to suggest the screen by finishing the rectangle from the T downwards, and up again on the right side of the M?
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