Hermit to HomeLogo Design Contest

what should i revise again from this design?

This is fun!

How about this?

We really like this shape of the graphic. Thank you for working with us on the revisions.

How about this

We think we are going to go with a version without the hermit. Can you make the swimmers slightly larger? Anything else you would change on this logo?

#56 Like this?

Can you make the person with the gun a bit more comical rather than like a sniper? That part is sort of a joke, not very serious.

Thanks. I think this may be the best combination.

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also, can you make a logo where the mountains stay brown but the swimmer and the person with the gun are blue.

And add 2 more swimmers.

Can you make this same logo but move the person with the gun over to the mountain side?

Yes, I will send early swimmers

Can you show us this one with the original swimmers?

Yes, thanks for making the edits. We'll discuss and let you know if there are any other versions we want to see. We like your logo!

Like this?

We would also love to see this logo with brown-green hills rather than blue-green hills, just for variety.

Can you shift the swimmers so they are swimming from the mountains toward the shore, rather than across the lake? The swimmers should be swimming vertical.

This is our current favorite logo in our tournament.

How about this? is it better than before.

This is great! Can you move the man with the gun to the other side? Make swimmers and man more prominent. Change “estd.” to “est.” and please change “Lake Chelan” to be on the same line with swim on next line.