I like the old-school feel of this. First off, the top needs to read "Strength & Conditioning" Could the barbell on the back be straight rather than bent? The hand placement on the guy should look more like this: http://crossfitexcellence.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/08/NickSquat.jpg And finally, could you make the character a little more detailed, maybe give him a viking/medieval helmet?